# CAD Atlas — Fresh-Eyes UX Review, Lap 2

Reviewer role: fresh-eyes UX (not implementer). Second pass, judging the shipped
progressive-disclosure sprint against the goal set in `UX-REVIEW.md`. This document
critiques; it does not change code.

Sources reviewed:
- `docs/UX-REVIEW.md` (the spec that was implemented — lap 1)
- `internal/atlas/atlas.json` (authored data: `plain_title`, `plain`, `trans_label`,
  `trans` per stage; `plain` per node)
- `internal/web/static/cad-atlas.html` (the renderer: Plain⇄Technical toggle, spine
  transition labels, legend, substrate/footer hidden in Plain)
- `/tmp/ux5/home.png` (deployed Plain view, stages 00–04 in frame)

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## 1. Verdict

**The sprint largely achieved the *phase* half of the success criterion and made a real
dent in the *transition* half — but it does not fully clear the bar. Grade for a naive
viewer: B / B+.**

Success criterion was: a viewer with no briefing can explain **every phase** AND **what
advances work across every transition.**

- **Phases: pass.** This is the big win. The headline hierarchy works — big plain_title
  ("Notice what's happening", "Why we're here", "Agents do the work"), a dim technical
  subtitle, and a jargon-free "what happens" sentence. A cold stakeholder can now narrate
  every column. This is a genuine, measurable improvement over lap 1, where every column
  was a mechanism name. Full marks here.

- **Transitions: partial.** The short spine labels ("Does it matter to us?", "Worth a
  session?", "Decision reached", "Sealed & agent-ready") convey the *gist* of each hop,
  which is a step-change from the blank arrows of lap 1. But three things hold it back
  from "can explain what advances work":
  1. The actual "what must be true to advance" sentence (`trans`) is **hover-only** (an
     SVG `<title>` tooltip). That is undiscoverable — nothing signals it's hoverable — and
     dead on touch devices. So the naive viewer gets the one-line theme, not the gate
     logic.
  2. The labels are **terse and grammatically mixed**: some are questions ("Does it matter
     to us?"), some are achieved-states ("Decision reached", "It's live"). A first-timer
     builds two different mental models — "is this the question asked here, or the answer
     reached?" — from one row.
  3. **They vanish on narrow screens.** All transition labels live inside `svg.spine`,
     which is `display:none` under 820px, and the stacked mobile layout renders no HTML
     fallback. The single biggest comprehension win of the sprint is absent on a phone.

- **The viewport undermines both.** The atlas is a 9-column horizontal scroll and a laptop
  shows ~stages 00–03. That means **stage 04, the one human gate — the thing the header
  literally advertises ("one human gate") — is off-screen on load**, along with execution,
  CI, deploy, and the loop. A first-timer cannot see the shape of the gated flow, cannot
  see that a human checkpoint exists, and gets no affordance that five more stages are to
  the right. The atlas's whole payoff — "see the auditable flow from signal to pod at a
  glance" — is not deliverable in the default viewport.

Net: the copy layer is excellent and the toggle is the right architecture. The remaining
gap is structural (what's visible, and where the transition rationale lives), plus one
stubborn copy residue (node titles). A naive viewer *can* explain the phases unprompted;
they can explain the transitions only at a slogan level, and only for the half of the
pipeline they happen to scroll to.

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## 2. What works (the genuine wins)

- **Plain default + persisted toggle.** Right call, right default. Nothing was thrown
  away; Technical is the old atlas verbatim. Architecture matches the spec.
- **Stage headline hierarchy.** plain_title dominant, technical title demoted to a dim mono
  subtitle, plain sentence underneath. Clean, scannable, correct visual weight.
- **Transitions exist at all.** Even terse, the labelled arrows turn a row of boxes into a
  narrated flow. This was the #1 lap-1 miss and it shipped in the default layer.
- **Density dropped in Plain.** Tags, risk chips, host ribbon and footer are all suppressed
  in Plain (`body.plain`), so the reading surface is airy and calm — a real contrast to the
  lap-1 wall of pills.
- **Stage 06 no longer reads as empty.** An authored "Automated checks" node with plain copy
  now backstops the live CI generation, so the CI gate never looks like a no-op on a cold
  load. Directly fixes lap-1 punch-item 7.
- **Feedback bus is honestly hedged.** Dashed violet + "partly manual today" in both the loop
  label and the legend. Matches the dogfooding-honesty discipline.
- **The pulse gives direction.** The travelling dot is a low-cost "this flows left-to-right,
  then loops back" cue — helpful for orientation.

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## 3. What's still weak (shipped Plain view)

**a. Node titles are still pure mechanism-jargon — the exact lap-1 disease, one level down.**
The node *body* is now plain, but the node *title* — the first, boldest thing the eye lands
on in a card — is untouched: "Applied AI Radar", "Intention substrate", "Admission
controller", "var-go Oath", "Session-Dispatch bridge", "Executor + reviewer loop",
"dma-cli · routing + scope", "assessor-loop ledger". The plain body can't fully rescue a
card whose title already framed it as a mechanism. The stage head got the plain-title/tech-
subtitle treatment; the node did **not** — an inconsistency that leaves each column half-
translated. See §4.

**b. The transition rationale is hidden and fragile.** As in §1: `trans` is hover-only
(undiscoverable, touch-dead) and the whole label layer disappears under 820px. The "what
must be true to advance" — the governance content the atlas exists to show — is the least
robustly delivered part of the whole thing.

**c. Horizontal scroll with no affordance = half the pipeline is invisible.** Nothing at the
right edge signals "more stages this way" — no fade, no scrollbar cue, no "→ 04–08", no
overview. A first-timer may reasonably believe the pipeline is five stages that end at "Write
the work order". The marquee human gate and the entire execute→ship→loop arc are off-frame by
default. This is the single largest comprehension barrier remaining.

**d. Transition-label attachment is weaker than specced.** Lap-1 §5 asked for **label chips
sitting on the spine**; what shipped is floating 10px mono text ~9px above the arrow with no
background. On the dark grid it reads, but it floats — the viewer has to mentally bind the
text to the arrow beneath it. A chip (or a short leader) would make the label read as *of*
the arrow, not near it.

**e. Gate treatment is cryptic.** Lap-1 §5 asked for a lock/shield glyph + stronger colour on
the two real gates (04 human, 06 CI). What shipped is a "▸ " prefix + gold + bold on those two
labels. A naive viewer will not read "▸" as "governance checkpoint"; the only real cue is
"one of these labels is gold", which leans entirely on the legend. The two most important hops
in the whole atlas deserve a glyph that says *stop / check*, not an arrowhead character.

**f. The legend doesn't match the colours actually on screen.** The KEY decodes green/amber/
coral as CI run-states plus gold=gate + dashed=feedback. But in Plain the cards show **violet,
blue, and coral pills** and **coloured/dashed borders** (council=violet, bridge=dashed-blue,
oath=dashed-gold, executor=coral) that the KEY never explains — while the green/amber/coral CI
states the KEY *does* explain are barely present in Plain. So the viewer sees a violet dot on
"Intention substrate" and a dashed-gold box on "var-go Oath" with no way to decode them, and a
legend describing states they can't see. Colour is carrying two unrelated meanings (authored
semantics vs. live CI status) under one key. Either key every colour/border shown in Plain, or
strip the decorative pills/borders in Plain so colour means only what the legend says.

**g. The technical subtitle is a wash — mild noise, mild help.** Under the plain_title sits
`s.title`: sometimes near-plain ("Signals", "Strategic session"), sometimes pure jargon
("TELOS", "Spec → Gitea issue", "PR → CI", "Execute · agentsquad"). For a naive viewer roughly
half of these subtitles are undecodable filler directly under the headline; for a new engineer
they're a useful canonical-name bridge without a mode-switch. Because it's dim and small the
noise cost is low, so **keep it** — but note the *inconsistency*: the stage trusts the reader
with a dim technical name under a plain headline, yet the node doesn't extend that same courtesy
(§4). Apply the pattern uniformly.

**h. Unexplained accent colours on headlines.** plain_title is violet for TELOS/Loop and amber
for the gate. Meaningful to the author, unkeyed for the viewer — a minor echo of problem (f).

**i. The feedback bus reads as a mystery line in-viewport.** The dashed violet return leg drops
straight down out of the TELOS column, but its label ("What did we learn? · feedback bus")
sits at the very bottom of a 9-column-wide canvas — off-screen for anyone who hasn't scrolled
down and right. In the default view you see an unexplained dashed vertical line and no origin
(stage 08 is off-frame right). The honesty hedge is good; the *legibility* of the loop in the
first screen is poor.

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## 4. Node-title question — recommendation: **add plain node titles; keep the technical name as a dim subtitle inside the card.**

Do **not** keep titles as-is, and do **not** simply swap in plain titles and delete the
technical ones. Mirror the pattern the stage head already uses, one level down:

```
[pill] Marks its own homework? No.          ← plain_t  (bold, primary)
       Executor + reviewer loop             ← t        (dim mono subtitle)
       One agent does the work; a second,   ← plain    (body, already shipped)
       independent agent reviews it …
```

Reasoning for the mixed audience:

- **The title is the frame.** The eye reads title → body. A jargon title ("Admission
  controller", "var-go Oath") sets a mechanism frame that a plain body then fights against.
  This is precisely the lap-1 diagnosis ("every node names a *mechanism* rather than the
  *thing that happens to the work*") — it was fixed for stages and bodies but left standing in
  node titles. The job is half-done until titles get the same treatment.
- **A naive viewer needs the plain title.** "Marks its own homework? No.", "Signed so tampering
  shows", "The one human yes/no", "A machine-checkable definition of done" — these are
  explainable at a glance; "dma-cli · routing + scope" is not.
- **A new engineer still needs the canonical name.** "var-go Oath", "Ed25519 admission
  controller", "assessor-loop ledger" are the searchable terms that connect the picture to the
  code and the brain. Deleting them would help the stakeholder and hurt the engineer — the
  wrong trade for a "everyone" audience.
- **Consistency is its own win.** Right now stage heads say "plain big / technical small" and
  nodes say "technical only". Two rules for the same card type is friction. One rule, applied
  at both levels, makes the whole atlas feel like one designed system and makes the toggle's
  mental model ("plain names up front, mechanisms one layer in") coherent.

Concretely: add an optional `plain_t` per node in `atlas.json`; in Plain render `plain_t` as
the title and `t` as a `tech-sub`-style dim line (reuse the existing class); in Technical keep
today's behaviour (`t` as title). Nodes without a `plain_t` fall back to `t`, so it's an
incremental authoring task, not a big-bang rewrite.

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## 5. Prioritized next punch list (top 6 by comprehension impact)

1. **Add plain node titles (`plain_t`), technical name demoted to a dim in-card subtitle.**
   Highest impact: the title is the first thing read and it's still the lap-1 jargon disease.
   Finishes the progressive-disclosure job the stages already got. (§3a, §4)

2. **Solve the horizontal-scroll blindness.** A first-timer must be able to tell the pipeline
   is nine stages and reach the human gate and the loop. Ship at least a right-edge fade +
   "→ stages 04–08" hint; ideally a "fit to width / overview" zoom toggle so the whole gated
   shape (and the one human gate the header promises) is visible at a glance. (§3c)

3. **Render transition labels in the stacked/narrow layout, and surface the `trans` sentence
   without a hover.** The labels currently die under 820px (they live only in the SVG) and the
   gate rationale is hover-only/touch-dead. Emit `trans_label` as an HTML element between
   stacked stages, and make the full `trans` reachable by click/tap (expandable), not just
   desktop hover. This is the "explain every transition" half of the success criterion. (§1, §3b)

4. **Give the two governance gates (04 human, 06 CI) a real glyph and make the feedback loop
   legible in-viewport.** Replace the "▸" prefix with a lock/shield on the gold gate labels so
   the checkpoints read as checkpoints; and attach a visible "What did we learn?" chip to the
   top of the feedback return leg near TELOS so the dashed line isn't a mystery in the first
   screen. (§3e, §3i)

5. **Reconcile the legend with the colours on screen in Plain.** Either key every pill/border
   meaning the Plain view shows (violet/blue/coral pills; council/bridge/oath borders) or drop
   the decorative pills/borders in Plain so colour means only the CI states the KEY describes.
   Today the legend and the canvas disagree. (§3f, §3h)

6. **Turn floating transition text into attached chips and normalise the grammar.** Give each
   label a small chip background so it reads as *on* the arrow, and pick one voice — all
   "what-must-be-true" states ("Mattered to us", "Decision reached", "Human said go", "All
   checks green", "It's live") reads more consistently than mixing questions and states. (§3d)

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### Scorecard vs. lap-1 punch list

| Lap-1 item | Status |
|---|---|
| 1. Label every arrow | **Shipped** (desktop only; hover-only rationale; dies on mobile) |
| 2. plain_what per stage + demoted title | **Shipped** — clean |
| 3. Plain⇄Technical toggle, default Plain, persisted | **Shipped** — correct |
| 4. Plain node primary text, `d` on demand | **Half** — bodies plain, **titles still jargon** (§4) |
| 5. Distinguish the two gates (lock/shield) | **Weak** — "▸"+gold, no glyph |
| 6. Legend keying colours + gate types | **Partial** — legend exists but doesn't match Plain colours |
| 7. Fix stage-06 empty column | **Shipped** — authored fallback node |
| 8. Honest feedback bus + suppress proper nouns in Plain | **Half** — bus honest; proper nouns still leak via node titles + tech-subs |
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